Talk:Albanians in Egypt/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LT910001 (talk · contribs) 21:23, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will take this review. I am sorry for how long you've had to wait. I've reviewed 60+ other articles, including some long and complex ones, and will review this article against the 6 good article criteria. I'll read over this article and have a think, then start the review in 2-3 days. --Tom (LT) (talk) 21:23, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Assessment

Whilst I commend the editors who have put some effort into improving this article, it is not suitable for GA status. My concerns include:

A confusing structure that focuses more on Turkish control of Egypt and specific personalitie than Armenians in general, with no real introductory statements
Incorrect statements, such as there being no more Armenians in Egypt, which contradict other articles which say there are at least 11,000 (see Albanians#Egypt)
Grammar and prose that need improving - especially paragraph structure
Lack of citations for several areas

I have rated this article "Start class" and encourage the nominator to edit it further, but it needs a fair amount of work before it is suitable for "good article" status. Yours, --Tom (LT) (talk) 06:28, 17 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Two places you may want to ask for help after this are at the guild of copy editors or at peer review. I would also suggest a visit to the teahouse, where you will be able to find a variety of helpful editors who can help you get started on editing. --Tom (LT) (talk) 06:31, 17 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]