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Just posting to expand my thoughts about a sentence that is being edit-warred over. The sentence is "Filson is known as a provider of rugged, quality outdoor clothing in classic designs." This paraphrases a source's description of the company's products. Two problems here: first, we are taking an author's opinion and presenting it as fact in Wikipedia's voice. Second, the author paraphrased, a writer for CNN's Money division would not be seen as a recognized authority on clothing quality. Caveat - I agree with the characterization, Filson does make tough, high-quality gear. But articles are for facts, and opinions clearly attributed to authoritative sources. I ask the IP editor to engage here rather than continuing the edit war. Thanks, The Interior (Talk) 13:49, 24 September 2013 (UTC)
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Hello. My name is John and I recently have a Wikipedia account to update the Shinola (retail company) page by submitting requests for others to review. I have a request related to Filson (company), which is the sister company of Shinola (retail company).
I've noticed the final sentence of the Ownership and leadership section has some incorrect text:
The source cited is an 11-year old article and the characterization is outdated and not correct. Based on a recent source I've shared below, I propose the following changes (see bold):
This source confirms manufacturing remains in U.S., and adds details on workforce decisions.
I'm not editing the article directly because of my conflict of interest, so can someone please review the proposed changes and update the page on my behalf? Thank you! JS at Shinola (talk) 18:23, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
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@Heartmusic678: Thank you once again for assisting with this Filson request last year. One of the edits appears to have been edited again, and in the process an error inserted. Also, the
Currently, the "Early History" section ends with, "Under current leadership, Filson has made organizational changes to streamline its business, including a decision to reduce positions in its Seattle and Kent manufacturing facilities and start having their products outsourced to factories in China to increase profits." There is no sourcing on the "China" claim (which is incorrect). Also, for the sake of alignment with what the company has said and done, and what was reported in the story that is used for sourcing, I propose changing the text to "Under current leadership, Filson has made organizational changes to streamline its business and be more efficient, including a decision to reduce positions in its Seattle and Kent manufacturing facilities and shift more production overseas."
Additionally, the "Retail locations" section says, "In addition to the company's retail website, Filson features flagship locations in Seattle, Washington, and Union Square, New York City, as well as brick-and-mortar stores in Portland, Oregon, San Francisco, California, Plano, Texas, Edina, Minnesota, Boston, Massachusetts Washington, D.C., Ballard, Seattle, Naperville, Illinois, and Seattle–Tacoma International Airport. Outside the US, there are stores in Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada, Toronto, Ontario, Canada, and Tokyo, Japan.
Filson maintains one outlet store, located in Eagan, Minnesota."
This is not accurate. For accuracy, I propose changing the text to "In addition to the company's retail website, Filson features flagship locations in Seattle, Washington, and Union Square, New York City, as well as brick-and-mortar stores in Portland, Oregon; San Francisco, California; Plano, Texas; Edina, Minnesota; Boston, Massachusetts; Washington, D.C.; Ballard, Washington; and Naperville, Illinois. Outside the US, there are stores in Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada, and Toronto, Ontario, Canada. : Done
Filson maintains one outlet store, located in Eagan, Minnesota."
Thanks for reviewing, JS at Shinola (talk) 18:06, 20 January 2022 (UTC)