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Has their recent advertising been described or discussed in published secondary sources? If so, please provide examples so that we can discuss inclusion in the article. SPECIFICOtalk23:57, 15 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Upon reviewing the three sources cited for the lead statement that Hillsdale relies on donors' contributions, I saw that the sources pointedly state that the donations are from politically conservative donors. I adjusted the lead text to conform to that statement, as verified by the cited sources. The prior version was reinstated with an edit summary that appears to reject the statements of cited RS.
I think that is the story of detail that should be in the body, not the lead. How did the sources decide the donors were conservative? Are 100% conservative? How much emphasis was place on that fact on each of the articles? If the source articles don't provide evidence for the claim then it probably shouldn't be in the article lead. If they do provide evidence then those details should be in the body and then we can decide if they should also be in the lead. Springee (talk) 16:12, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with Springee. This is the lead, not the body. We've already established that it's a conservative school in the lead do we have to add that descriptor again? I also agree that the sources cited support that conservatives donate to the college but that's their focus - that's it's a conservative school. Should we be surprised that conservatives donate to conservative causes? Further, we don't delineate the political leanings of other schools that take donations so why do we need to do that anyway, regardless of what sources say? Is it relevant to the article? Dbroer (talk) 16:49, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The function of our lead sections is to summarize the article content. This is highly significant, as we know from the somewhat unusual 3 in-line sources cited within the lead. The political conservative nexus of the funding is a central point of the cited RS references. Hence, yes it warrants just a few words in the lead to accurately and clearly reflect our sources for this content. SPECIFICOtalk17:15, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I disagree that it's "highly significant" in the lead. I also disagree that it's unusual. It's a conservative school. It would be unusual if it's donators were liberal/progressive. Conservative donators would be expected, particularly since we've already established that it's a conservative school. The sources are there to support the fact that school doesn't take federal funding. The political leanings of its donators is immaterial in my opinion, particularly in the lead. If you could expand on why it's highly significant and unusual, I might be open to your viewpoint but I just can't see why it would be in the lead. Dbroer (talk) 17:42, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
According to RS -- which does not cover the political, religious, social, or other views of colleges' donors -- the political part of "political conservative" is significant. That is the point of the cited sources. Have you read them recently? They are about how Hillsdale is expanding its political profile and its presence in Washington, DC. SPECIFICOtalk18:04, 29 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies for the delayed response. I was spending time with family. I hope you had a nice New Years. The paragraph in question in the lead specifically talks about how Hillsdale relies on private donations because it doesn't take federal funding. It says nothing about Hillsdale expanding its political profile and presence in Washington. The references are there to support the text - that they rely on private donations. I have read them and they do support that. The fact that they are conservative donors belongs on the body. We could also expand on the political profile allegation there but the lead already states that the school is conservative and there's no need for double adjectives in a summary. You're making a valid point but I think we're just objecting to having the descriptor twice in the summary. Hopefully that clarifies my stance at least. Dbroer (talk) 16:39, 2 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Best wishes to you too. The source - as I said above - says "political conservative" not conservative. That source and many others address the recent politicization of Hillsdale in concert with other politicization of education in the US. Politico is about the college that wants to take over Washington. I believe there are also sources that name some of the activist political conservatives, but I do not have them at hand. Here is some further reading. SPECIFICOtalk21:06, 2 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Why no mention of Gov. DeSantis the use of Hillsdale as a model for revamping Florida's New College?