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Talk:Steel casting

The article states that "[Steel] has a higher melting point [than iron]..." I can't speak to every alloy of steel, but generally steel has a notably lower melting point than iron. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2603:9001:6802:CE00:91A9:E540:B12B:470A (talk) 00:49, 6 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This article is a bit heavy on advertising so I intend to tone it down. Biscuittin 12:05, 4 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Done. 86.21.225.104 13:22, 4 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]


I'm pretty sure that some ductile and grey cast Irons (especially austempered and compacted cast Irons) are stronger. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 137.207.232.57 (talk) 20:41, 10 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Stronger than what? --Wizard191 (talk) 12:34, 12 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Article Quality

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This article has incorrect statements, such as:

Overall the article is poorly written and desperately needs cleanup.

Tags will be added per the above points. Mfields1 (talk) 01:49, 6 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

more online references should be cited as well; citing Machinery Handbook exclusively, especially a 1996 edition, is not sufficient. Mfields1 (talk) 01:53, 6 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Most of your questions can be answered by wp:v, which states: "The threshold for inclusion in Wikipedia is verifiability, not truth". All of the statements are based on the ref supplied (Oberg). As such, if you disagree with any of the statements supply a source that disproves it.
  2. You are correct that more than one ref is always a good thing. As such, I've added the template for it.
  3. Your link to wp:lists is not applicable to this article, as it's an article not a list. A table is the perfect format for the information being relayed. I would be very hard pressed to see you convert it to prose and make it easier to digest.
  4. Nothing on Wikipedia states that verifiability must be reached through online references. As such, this is a moot point.
  5. If you think things are missing from the article please add to it, don't plaster it with unnecessary template and poo poo comments on the talk page. If you don't have time to add the information but have recommendations for improvements, please list them in a constructive way. Wizard191 (talk) 02:36, 6 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The list above was meant to be constructive. The article needs significant improvement for the reasons stated above. Mfields1 (talk) 01:10, 7 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Article does not cover topic in a broad manner

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The article does not cover the topic sufficiently. It was a better article before it was expanded to cover only two ASTM grades -

The table presents an unbalanced image of steel castings as being only from two ASTM types. A user searching this encyclopedia would be presented with a lot of technical information that is better left in handbooks. It may satisfy some editors to create these tables but the article would be more encylopedic to contain more general information about steel castings first, then a separate article could be created for steel casting alloys.

Significant other ASTM standards are not even mentioned in the sense of providing a balance with other ASTM or world wide standards used for steel castings, for example -

ASTM A 27 - Standard Specification for Steel Castings, Carbon, for General Application ASTM A217 - Standard Specification for Steel Castings, Martensitic Stainless and Alloy, for Pressure-Containing Parts, Suitable for High-Temperature Service ASTM A352 - Standard Specification for Steel Castings, Ferritic and Martensitic, for Pressure-Containing Parts, Suitable for Low-Temperature Service ASTM A703 - Standard Specification for Steel Castings, General Requirements, for Pressure-Containing Parts ASTM A732 - Standard Specification for Castings, Investment, Carbon and Low Alloy Steel for General Application… ASTM A781 - Standard Specification for Castings, Steel and Alloy, Common Requirements, for General Industrial Use

There are plenty others this is only a sampling.

I suggest the article title be schanged to "Alloys used in steel casting" Mfields1 (talk) 01:38, 7 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]