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I’d like to submit the following four requests for review. I’ve tried to keep the changes as limited as possible. For each claim, I’ve provided at least one substantive source and explained my thinking. Thank you for your consideration.
I’d like to change this sentence:
to this:
Explanation: The original sentence is incomplete and misleading. Here’s a full list, as verified by OpenSecrets.org (https://www.opensecrets.org/donor-lookup/results?name=adam+kovacevich):
10 Democrats: Joe Biden, Suzan DelBene, Mike Doyle, Tim Kaine, Amy Klobuchar, Joe Lieberman, Zoe Lofgren, Brian Schatz, Eric Swalwell, and Inez Tenenbaum.
6 Republicans: Tom Cotton, Will Hurd, Jim Jordan, Jerry Moran, Ben Sasse, and Roger Wicker.
Also, there seems to be a bias toward including Tom Cotton, so if we single him out, then it’s only fair to note that in 2021, Kovacevich said of Cotton, “I support him as a friend, but that doesn’t mean we agree on policies” (https://www.motherjones.com/politics/2021/04/chamber-of-progress-google-facebook-amazon-twitter/).
I’d like to remove the following sentence:
Explanation: The footnotes for this claim — https://www.thecrimson.com/article/1997/12/1/non-unionized-farms-not-exploitative-says-grape/ and https://adamkovacevich.com — don’t say anything about Serbia. Perhaps that’s because Kovacveich is not of Serbian ancestry. :-)
I’d like to change this:
to this:
Explanation: John Kovacevich was hardly a “magnate.” That’s a loaded term, which makes people think of wealth and power. In fact, Kovacevich Farms filed for bankruptcy and shut down in 2016 (https://www.bakersfield.com/news/business/farmers-loss-is-gain-for-another/article_b123f73c-ec85-5fb2-9192-519b3037721b.html). It seems that “businessman” is both more accurate and less biased than “magnate.”
I’d like to add the following sentence to the “Politics” section:
Explanation: This position has been well-documented; see, for example, https://www.cnbc.com/2021/04/15/tech-industry-group-funded-by-amazon-facebook-and-google-supports-a-corporate-tax-hike.html.
Signed,
BlueRoses13 (talk) 10:33, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
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I'd like to submit three more requests for review. These changes add context that's missing, without which the article is incomplete. For each change, I've provided multiple substantive sources and explained my thinking. Thank you for your consideration.
I’d like to change the first sentence from this:
to this:
Explanation: Kovacveich is known as much for his decade at Google as he is for founding the Chamber of Progress; hence the addition of "Google executive," which is supported by https://www.politico.com/newsletters/morning-tech/2021/04/30/leaked-google-email-reveals-ties-to-new-pro-tech-group-794997 and https://www.politico.com/states/california/story/2021/07/11/nowhere-to-be-found-the-internet-industrys-dc-powerhouse-recedes-1388216.
And neither of these positions would have been possible without his time in Democratic politics; hence the addition of "Democratic aide," which is supported by https://www.bakersfield.com/columnists/in-the-eye-of-a-political-storm/article_0619fdd8-e5d1-5e8f-8c33-843389bf82ee.html.
I’d like to change this sentence:
to this:
Explanation: I think Wikipedia readers will want to know the key details of Kovacevich’s career, each of which I've documented with footnotes.
After this:
I’d like to add this:
Explanation: I believe Wikipedia readers deserve greater context about this incident, which was covered by the Los Angeles Times (https://www.latimes.com/archives/la-xpm-2000-nov-22-mn-55663-story.html) and the Stanford Report (https://news.stanford.edu/news/2000/december6/grapes-126.html).
Signed,
BlueRoses13 (talk) 02:51, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
References
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Would it make sense to add a sentence about Kovacevich's punditry? As you can see from his Authory page, he is often called upon by the mainstream media to offer the perspective of technology companies.
I think we can find a balance between, say, the 26 publications itemized in Linda Moore and the single sentence in Michael Beckerman ("He appears in the media to offer the industry's perspective on topical policy issues").
Here's what I propose (maybe as as the last line in the "career" section?):
For your convenience, I've formatted the six footnotes.
Thank you for your consideration.
Signed,
BlueRoses13 (talk) 01:14, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
References
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I'm not sure this guy is notable. Most of the references are to his own work or his own site. A quick Google News search shows he's been ~commenting on tech-related things, but there's nothing really about this guy or why he's notable. Open to other interpretations. MAINEiac4434 (talk) 20:12, 7 August 2023 (UTC)